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TOEFL GRE GMAT Sample Essays - Essay # 509 - The following appeared in an editorial from a newspaper serving the town of Saluda. "The Saluda Consolidated High School offers over 200 different courses from which its students can choose. A much smaller private school down the street offers a basic curriculum of only 80 different courses, but it consistently sends a higher proportion of its graduating seniors on to college than Consolidated does. By eliminating at least half of the courses offered there and focusing on a basic curriculum, we could improve student performance at Consolidated and also save many tax dollars." Discuss how well reasoned . . . Etc.

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Topic 509: The following appeared in an editorial from a newspaper serving the town of Saluda. "The Saluda Consolidated High School offers over 200 different courses from which its students can choose. A much smaller private school down the street offers a basic curriculum of only 80 different courses, but it consistently sends a higher proportion of its graduating seniors on to college than Consolidated does. By eliminating at least half of the courses offered there and focusing on a basic curriculum, we could improve student performance at Consolidated and also save many tax dollars." Discuss how well reasoned . . . Etc. | Score & Analysis

The argument that appeared in a newspaper editorial in the town of Saluda recommends that the Saluda Consolidated High School eliminate at least half of the courses and focus on a basic curriculum to improve student performance and to save many tax dollars. The argument , in its present state, seems coherent at the first stance, but, on further analyzing the argument, a number of overreaching assumptions and lack of adequate information become apparent. Among the foremost of its flaws, is the failure on author's part to address or even acknowledge other reasons of good performance of students at the small private school.

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