TOEFL GRE GMAT Sample Essays - Essay # 512 - The following appeared as part of a business plan created by the management of the Take Heart Fitness Center. "After opening the new swimming pool early last summer, Take Heart saw a 12 percent increase in the use of the center by members. Therefore, in order to increase the number of our members and thus our revenues, which depend on membership fees, we should continue to add new recreational facilities in subsequent years: for example, a multipurpose game room, a tennis court, and a miniature golf course. Being the only center in the area offering this range of activities would give us a competitive advantage in the health and recreation market." Discuss how well reasoned . . . Etc.

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TOEFL GRE GMAT Sample Essays - Essay # 512 - The following appeared as part of a business plan created by the management of the Take Heart Fitness Center. "After opening the new swimming pool early last summer, Take Heart saw a 12 percent increase in the use of the center by members. Therefore, in order to increase the number of our members and thus our revenues, which depend on membership fees, we should continue to add new recreational facilities in subsequent years: for example, a multipurpose game room, a tennis court, and a miniature golf course. Being the only center in the area offering this range of activities would give us a competitive advantage in the health and recreation market." Discuss how well reasoned . . . Etc.

Topic 512: The following appeared as part of a business plan created by the management of the Take Heart Fitness Center. "After opening the new swimming pool early last summer, Take Heart saw a 12 percent increase in the use of the center by members. Therefore, in order to increase the number of our members and thus our revenues, which depend on membership fees, we should continue to add new recreational facilities in subsequent years: for example, a multipurpose game room, a tennis court, and a miniature golf course. Being the only center in the area offering this range of activities would give us a competitive advantage in the health and recreation market." Discuss how well reasoned . . . Etc. | Score & Analysis

The conclusion endorsed in the argument is that by adding new recreational facilities in subsequent years, Take Heart can increase both its member and revenues. This argument is somehow convincing at the first glance, but further reflection reveals the conclusion is based on some dubious assumption and the reasoning is biased. As the paragraphs to come will reveal that how groundless the conclusion is.

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