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TOEFL GRE GMAT Sample Essays - Essay # 20 - It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.


Topic 20: It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay. | Score & Analysis

Some people think that it will be good for their children to grow them in the country, because they think that, living in the countryside will be peaceful and the children’s will not be effected by several diseases, which are caused due to pollution in the air. Where as some other people think that it will be good for their children’s to grow in cities because if their children’s were grown in the villages, the child won’t be able to catch the technology which is developing vigorously, because the standard of studies is increasing with time and to catch it the children’s should run with it, other wise they wont be able to get a good position.


The first reason regarding why I think that, it will be good for the students to live in the cities other then living in the village is that the children’s will get enough knowledge only by staying in the cities. For example we know that the technology of computer is growing vigorously and to run with it we should attend different courses, and to attend different courses we should stay in cities, other then living in the villages.

The second reason is that, most of the people are living in the cities for good jobs because in villages they wont get a good job which suit their education and if the people are living in the cities then the children’s also should live with them in the cities because a child can get enough knowledge with only parent. To get enough knowledge the child should be grown in the cities other then in the villages.

By considering the above two reasons, I think that it will be good for parents to grow their child in cities because by living in the cities the child will get enough knowledge from parents as well as with the surrounding people.

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