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Topic 20: It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay. | Score & Analysis People need so many things to live a good live. The first thing which they need re forest to get good air and the second thing which people need is animals they need different animals for different things one of the example is got which is needed for the people to get milk for children’s and the last most essential thing which they need is clean water because nowadays most of the people are suffering from many diseases because they are not able to get clear air. According to me I thing that, the most important source, which we have to protect, is forest because most of the things are linked to the forests. Nowadays we can see that most of the poisonous gases are evolving in nature and disturbing the nature. Due to this pollutants the people are suffering from different disease. It will be good to protect the forest because most of the diseases are spreading in the nature due to cutting of trees since trees are the only sources to provide good air and if the trees are destroyed we wont get fresh air and due to more amount of toxic gases when compared to fresh air the people are suffering from different diseases. So it will be good for the people to protect the forest by planting the trees other then cutting the trees. Trees are the only sources for most of the animals and they wont able to survive if there won’t be forests. For example cow, got, elephant. . Etc need forest to get shelter and food. This animals will spend there time by moving around the forest to get food and good air and if the forests are destroyed they wont be able to survive and due ton this they may die. So this is our duty to protect the forest, by planting trees, other then destroys the forest by cutting the trees. At last I would like to conclude my essay by telling that there are different resources, which are to be protected, but the most and important resource to be protected is forests because most of the living beings are dependent on forest in one or the other way. - written by kirthi | Computer score: 4 What to do: |
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